Through reading the poems of witness one of the poems that caught my attention was “Song of Napalm” By Bruce Weigl. This poem is a very well written moving tale of a battle field scene in Vietnam. The feeling that I felt when reading this poem is sadness. The vivid imagery incorporated to describe the fire felt taking place here was amazing however at some points horrifying. The particular part of this poem that stuck out to me the most was in the fifth paragraph where Weigl describes the last effort to escape the burning napalm covering a young girl frantically trying to escape her inevitable death. This imagery made me sad because it really brought to light the horrors faced during times of war. Another part of this poem that sticks out to me is the way Weigl describes how he tried to deal with the sight of the girl burning form napalm
So I can keep on living,
So I can stay here beside you,
I try to imagine she runs down the road and wings
Beat inside her until she rises
Above the stinking jungle and her pain
Eases, and your pain, and mine.
A poem that stood out to me for its simplicity is the poem By
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Aaron,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your posts on the two poems you chose, "Songs of Napalm," and the poem by Kevin Powers.You were very descriptive in writing how the poem made you feel and the contrast between amazing and horrifying. This poem was horrifying, so you could see why the speaker would want to rewrite the ending to one of fantasy.
The poem, "letter written During the Lull in Fighting," was interesting for me to read because I wrote about the same poem.